Your example has a big problem. You should not wire return count output of VISA Write to byte count input of VISA Read. This will only work if the number of bytes written is greater than the number of bytes you expect to read back. And even in this case, unless you have termination character turned on, you'll get a timeout error. In other cases, you'll only get a partial read of the receive buffer. Better to use VISA Bytes at Serial Port to determine how many actual bytes are available or if the response always has a termination character, enable that and set the byte count to some arbritrarily high number.
There are also a number of shipping examples for serial communication. Open the Example Finder and enter serial as the search paramter.